Monday, 21 March 2011

THE CONCLUSIVE BLOG TASK

“The music business is a cruel and shallow money trench, a long plastic hallway where thieves and pimps run free, and good men die like dogs. There’s also a negative side.”
-Hunter S. Thompson

As the famous pop music journalist Thompson says in this piece of gonzo journalism that he invented, pop music is business that is all about money. Our pop video had to gain an audience to get money. Our pop video also reflects in part Thompson's view of the human race. In the literal sense our pop video follows the idea that ‘thieves and pimps run free’. The narrative of the video can be seen as one where each is for their own. To survive as an individual, with no money, security or health. The progress of the blog explains this in many ways…

The blog from this year explains everything that I have created and how within that I have researched, produced and published it. It reflects how my ideas have developed and what I could have improved if I were to have repeated it. After seven months of hard work and motivation in the write up’s in the blog and the finished product of the pop video I have finally come to an end. It is one that I am relatively satisfied with and feel confident enough to use as my Media coursework. However, I have come across many minor problems, but one that I was more of an issue was to do with the location of the filming of the pop video. As a group, we had trouble in finding and securing a location for the shoot. Initially, we had a location but we were told that we did not have permission to shoot they for the day. Over and over again we found new locations that fitted our narrative and theme, but again we were rejected due to filming purposes, the amount of people who would be on location and the age of ourselves; these all discouraged many of the industries and councils and prevented us from using the area. Finally, we found a perfect location on the same land as one of the boarding houses at school. In all of the locations that we found, this was probably the most accessible and easiest to film in. It was a two minute drive from school and we had all permissions guaranteed to film how ever we needed.

Overall, the creation of the pop video, blog, digipack and advert it has been a long and painful piece of work. In retrospect I could have done it differently, but I am happy with the works as a whole.

Tuesday, 15 March 2011

BLOG TASK THREE; AUDIENCE. WHAT I LEARNT FROM MY AUDIENCE FEEBACK.

To asses audience feedback we took data from various sources – YouTube, a Focus Group, our peeps and our family. I tried to use open questions and a thorough discussion with all members of the focus group through out and realised this was a small scale trial of our pop video and ancillary products.

Our target audience considered of mainly male 16-25 year olds who may live in London. Most being lower-class youths who’d be seen as CDE in the scale of Jictar. Jictar separates audiences in terms of class. Those being ABC would have a higher education and stereotypically a richer generation. Our pop video however incorporates CDE, those who possibly reflect the gang members…under-educated, not very wealthy and holds poor morals. We suggested that this would our target audience because of the similarities of the gang members and there ability to relate to them, but of course we know that our audience could spread to a much wider population. An example of this would be our Focus Group members who were mainly male 17-18 who lived in a well rounded background. In terms of Jictar they would sit in the BCD area. By their responses they enjoyed it and understood it, so it is a pop video that can relate to many other audience members than just the CDE arena.

With six weeks gone by since we uploaded our video we have successfully achieved 849 hits and a lot of positive feedback. One saying… “Coming from an artistic background i think you should put this forward in the Baftas for best short film, great directing by the way.” And another saying “this is amazing”. All of the comments have been very positive including one giving us a “8.5/10” This was a great opportunity to allow others to give general feedback that was not bias in any way by the school or the students.

Within the Focus Group session we wanted to address and discover whether they enjoyed it, if they understood the message, the narrative, the representation of the characters, the performance elements of both the DJ and the gang members, the genre of film, the technique of filming and any general conventions of stereotypes that we followed or subverted. Finally, we wanted a honest opinion on how any part of the vide could have been improved.

The Focus Group consisted of six students (four male, 3 female). We handed out our ‘questionnaire’ of ten questions individually to every member. We allowed them to watch the video once and gave them enough time to fill it in. We only wanted a general gist of their opinion and what they read from the meaning. Afterwards we had a more in depth discussion of their answers and attempted to dive deeper in to their personal responses. We achieved some supplementary information in addition to the questionnaire, because I think many felt more obliged to give a verbal response. We knew that using both techniques would give us the widest breadth of answers and feedback from audiences that we were actually targeting! One male student aged 17 from London said “it conforms to stereotypes and is a edgy and exciting video.”

We tried to use the theory of Blumer and Katz on “uses and gratifications” to assess our audience response. Blumer and Katz say that audiences respond in four ways. The question was did ours respond to our pop video in this way. Blumer and Katz identify four ways that the media is used or gives gratification.

1) The audience identifying with the characters on screen. We were trying in our pop video to get the viewer to identify with the gang members who behave rebelliously and on the ‘edge’ of out Focus Group, 4 out of six identified with the image.

2) Diversion – a form of escape or emotional release from everyday pressures. The video, especially to those in the CDE Jictar position would see this video as form of escape. Something that they may look forward to doing in their spare time, or something that they could just relate to as a means of release from the pressures at home or school.

3) Surveillance – A supply of information about ‘what’s going on’ in the world. For many of our untraditional audience members this video would most definitely be an in-sight to some teenager’s behaviour. As a complete generalisation of teenagers it could be very misleading, but something that could open up many people’s eyes to the realistic truth.
4) Personal Relationships – Companionship via TV personalities and characters, and sociability through discussion about TV with other people. This may not directly apply to our video, but I believe that the video can be heavily discussed with a large age range of people. Discussion topics could include social behaviour, juveniles, security and curfew’s.

Stuart Hall would suggest that the production institution encodes a message though the media text. This offers a preferred meaning and may be actively decoded to audiences. In the process of activation the meaning can be accepted and called the dominant reading or rejected and called the oppositional reading. On the other hand however, the reading can be ‘negotiated’. So in terms of our pop video the preferred message is that the DJ leads the gang members into ‘war’ and encourages aggression through the fast moving music. The oppositional reading, however which most of the females of the Focus Group seemed to read was that the DJ was simply a second narrative that played the music and the gang members were fighting one another for unknown reasons. However, the males saw the DJ as one that indirectly lead them to their fait and then left them once the confrontation began. As all the male perspectives saw it as the preferred meaning, we concluded that the video is very male dominated and that it is actually targeted to the male gender!

And finally, Aristole's theory suggests that the goal o agumentaive writing I to persuade your audience that your ideas are valid, or more valid than someone else’s. The Greek philosopher Arisole 2,000 years ago divided the means of persuasion, appeals into three categories; Ethos, Pathos and Logos. Obviously, Artisotle did not apply this to pop videos, but I can be applied via his theory.


1) Ethos – This entails the idea of credibility. Audiences must respect the character t be able to understand the narrative. In terms of our pop video, I believe many 1-5 year old males can most definitely relate to the characters. Like I mentioned before, we did aim the video at students in sixth form or older who may be interested in rebellious behaviour and bad habits. I could also apply to the DJ. Thousands of boys grow up in ore of DJ’s and may look up to our characters as someone they’d like to be. They’d show great respect towards them and be able to relate to the video better and in turn understand the narrative clearly.

2) Pathos – This means to appeal to audiences through the reader’s emotions. The high drive and build of energy can ‘pump up’ the audiences and encourage them that they are on this journey of rebellion too. The excitement grows through out the video and helps audiences to feel a part of the narrative.

3) Logos - This describes the idea of using words and vocabulary in persuading by the use of reasoning or speaking. However, with the song including no lyrics this cannot be applied.
I know it seems strange to use the ideas of an ancient philosopher, but I do think that pop videos run on ethos and pathos as the main ways they attract an audience.

Overall, I think the meaning that we tried to give across was successfully accepted and the general gist of the video was popular with our Focus Group and other outsiders. The YouTube comments were positive with great reviews. However, I think that if we were to re-shoot it we may have created the narrative a little clearer to really underline the idea of two gangs who are being lead by the music.

Monday, 14 March 2011

DIRECTOR'S COMMENTARY

The director’s commentary was a way to help audiences to understand the narrative and message of the story line. It is a verbal analysis of the narrative and continues through out the video whilst different aspects and elements are portrayed. It may even help some audience members to understand more than just the preferred meaning. It has a slightly edgier depth to it that possibly would not be recognised in the first viewing. After all, if audiences are not captured within the first playing of the video then it simply was enjoyable or gripping enough. It enables anyone to learn a little more about the narrative and why specific actions took place; like the song choice or the shot techniques. Two of the male members were used to record the commentary to really drill in the idea of a ‘mans world’. It may seem a little sexiest, but the video only incorporates the male gender to portray more aggression and violence. The video had intentions to follow the stereotypes of the male force, so the commentary only encourages this strong theme.